I'm commenting on my own blog entry, but I just wanted to reflect on the photostory above. Essentially, I think it tells a simple story, which is good. I staying away from text and letting the photos tell the story. Were I to have the luxury of going back in time with the camera, I would perhaps add some shots specifically to further the "plot", to follow the little girls search for blueberries, while the big girls keep picking them in fistfuls. I am definitely going to try to edit the music so it doesn't just cut off abruptly. And perhaps I'll tweak the transitions, "ken burns" effects and the length of some of the shots. Having said all that. I really, really like this little story and loved working on it. 'nuff said.
I'm commenting on my own blog entry, but I just wanted to reflect on the photostory above. Essentially, I think it tells a simple story, which is good. I staying away from text and letting the photos tell the story. Were I to have the luxury of going back in time with the camera, I would perhaps add some shots specifically to further the "plot", to follow the little girls search for blueberries, while the big girls keep picking them in fistfuls. I am definitely going to try to edit the music so it doesn't just cut off abruptly. And perhaps I'll tweak the transitions, "ken burns" effects and the length of some of the shots. Having said all that. I really, really like this little story and loved working on it. 'nuff said.
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